Wednesday, July 06, 2011

Sample Smoke Signals

One more.--This is the best one for our class to read.  Notice the clear topic sentences and the evidence in each paragraph.

Here's the best one.--but it's a bit more complex than we're shooting for and might mess you up--still, great writing.

This one is good, too.

1 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

I enjoyed reading the essay "If We Forgive Our Fathers, What is Left?" it is organized on showing how victor adjusts emotionally and mentally. I will use this as an example while working on my essay.

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